TITLELESS

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This is something I just wrote. Well, not exactly. More like something I just completed. It’s a new week and its Monday I have to think again.Its really short, I don’t even know what to title it. It just came to my head now. Am surprise am thinking about it now .

But enjoy it.

Scenes play in my head of Memories long buried
Buried but yet alive in a way quite explainable
I smile, my heart had a  rush of emotions
For still the pain and happiness  pierces through
Leaving me confuse, crushed and broken just for a little while
For at the end my head always wins the battle over my heart
I laugh at myself. Its no use when you have long gone
I still moved on.

“””In memory of my true friends during NYSC”””

Starting from the left

  1. Peace(biggest girl)
  2. Patrick(Owner of Patrick stories)
  3. Unity
  4. Ejike
  5. Kenny

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My question for my fellow bloggers/viewers/readers:

1. What’s your opinion and contributions on this post/poem?

2. What are the memorable things that you can remember during you schools days?

 

 

Please let me know all your reactions, views and insights in the comment box below!

 

 

 

Written by:

Kogwuonye Patrick Onyeka

Writer/Blogger/Educator/Tutor

University of Benin

www.facebook.com/patrickstories

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10 thoughts on “TITLELESS

    1. Thanks for the comment.

      Some questions put to you here in the post where not answered.

      I will like to ask a simple question for my fellow readers and viewers.

      1. What is your own views and contributions on this articles?

      2. What are the memorable things that you can remember during you schools days?

      Please let me know all your reactions, views and insights in the comment box below!

      You are welcome

      #PATRICKSTORIES
      Peace ✌and Love ❤

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  1. 1. This poem took me back to my school days and all the emotions! Funny how many emotions I experienced in one day back then!
    2. I remember the laughter, the silliness and the fun my friends and I would have. So many times we wouldn’t plan what we were going to do for the evening, we would just go. I plan more these days, but I still like to be silly and spend my time laughing with friends.

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    1. Oh am touch by this comment, this blew me away. Thank you for taking the time to share these beautiful comments through these words.

      These words are painted in truth, experience and perspective. I especially love how you started it and how you ended the comment. Beautifully written and as I read through again on each line I was amazed . Each word you used are true and reflective of my personal encounter back then in school.

      This produced a smile on my tired face after a long day. You’re appreciated.

      You are welcome Mrs Kstites

      #PATRICKSTORIES
      Peace ✌and Love ❤

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  2. I like the poem. It is sweet and I relate to the feelings expressed. I didn’t have much luck in friendship in high school but that is because of my anxiety issues and because I didn’t have much in common with the people around me. But I did have a few friendships that were very meaningful to me and when I look back at those friendships I feel sad that they weren’t meant to be in my life longer… That is the hardest part of growing up… realizing that many friendships are temporary. I’m still looking for that one friend who will actually be there and stay. I’m grateful to have found some online people to talk to, even though they are far away ^_^

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    1. Thanks for taking your precious the to comment on my post/poem.

      I so much enjoyed this statement in your comment:

      “”””””it is sweet and I relate to the feelings expressed””””

      This is how I do my things, I make sure all my poems have meaning so the mind of viewers or readers will not be only imagination but it look more real and superior to their thinking.

      Am happy you answered some questions put after you. That is very good of you.

      I so much appreciate that.

      Thanks for giving me a chance to talk to you. Am please now I have someone who have my same idea and agree with me.

      Thanks for this last words-

      “”””” I ‘m grateful to have found some online people to talk to,even though they are far away “””””

      It touched me and made smile.

      One more time, thanks🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

      You are welcome

      #PATRICKSTORIES
      Peace ✌and Love ❤

      ———————————————————————————————

      Am amazed by your comment and contribution on the post in my site.

      Wish to be a friend to you.

      Am Patrick by name.

      Love to connect to you.
      Here are my contact.

      Email- patrickreallstory@gmail.com

      like my Facebook Page (patrickstories)

      follow me on instagram@ patrickstories

      Chat me up on whatsapp@ +2349038156756

      Editor: PATRICK @patrickrealstories.wordpress.com

      I will be happy if my request is accepted.

      #PATRICKSTORIES
      Peace ✌and Love ❤

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    1. Thanks for taking your precious time to reply my questions.

      Am happy you answered some questions put after you. Such a profound way of answering the questions being put on to you.

      That is very good of you.

      You are welcome Mrs/Miss Chocoviv

      #PATRICKSTORIES
      Peace ✌and Love ❤

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